Wednesday, September 04, 2013

Dina's Smile (a 450-word freaky flash fiction story) by Oren Shafir


Later, after she was raped by Shechem, I was the one Dina sought out for comfort.

That first time I comforted her, though,  she was around four, and I was around 12. Simeon had accidently hit her with a rock above her left eye. The women stopped the bleeding with some shepherds-purse. Then they passed her around like a loaf of bread, each one trying her own trick to soothe her: something sweet, a rocking motion, a rattling noise, even a breast. But still she wailed her heartbreaking tones.

The other boys were not about, but even then, I knew she was special, and I watched her closely. I noticed an almost imperceptible curling of her lips and a glimmer in her eyes, a smile – Dina’s smile - masked by her tears.  Our eyes met, and Dina recognized my detection. She immediately reached out her arms to me, buried her head against skinny boy’s chest and went silent.
Dina always knew how to get what she wanted. How to coax a coin from father by making her eyes even bigger. She knew how to trick her way out of chores by feigning cramps to get mother’s sympathy. And as she grew older, Dina could turn the head of any man. But when she really wanted something, she came to me. Our eyes would connect like that first time when I was the only one who saw her smile, and she knew I’d do anything for her.

I was the first one she told how Shechem had raped her. But Shechem said he loved her, and Father was going to give her to him as a bride. Simeon, always the hot-head, wanted to attack at once.

But Father said, “You will make me odious to the inhabitants of the land, the Canaanites and the Perizzites; my numbers are few,”

“What if there were a way to rid ourselves of them all at once?” I said, and I convinced Father of the plan.
So Shechem and his father, Hamor, and all the men of the city, agreed to be circumcised before the marriage took place, and on the third day, when they were sore, we came upon the city unawares, and killed all the males.
Afterwards, before I even cleaned myself of the blood, I went straight to Dina.

“Did it work just as I said?” she asked.
“Yes.”

“They’re all dead?”
“Yes, it was a slaughter”

“And Shechem, too?”

“Yes.”
“Did he suffer?”

“No, it was fast.”
“Good,” she said.

“But he raped you," I said.
“Yes,” she said, "he raped me.”

But as she turned away, I saw Dina’s smile.

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